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Debangkok Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Please help edit my email

Dear all,

I have interest in MBA program and I would like to have some detail and sugestion

The detail as below.

Dear sir,

I have interest in your program and I would like to know that the office (study room) of the coming batch (2011) would move to the new bulding and I would like to sugest that application form and its process should make modernization ( because it ' so old not modern)

Thank you for your information inadvance

Best regards,
  

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Hi, I have interest in MBA program and I would like to have some detail and sugestion The detail as below. Dear sir, I have interest in your program and I would like to know that the office (study room) of the coming batch (2011) would move to the new bulding and I would like to sugest that application form and its process should make modernization ( because it ' so old not modern) Thank you for your information inadvance I suggest this. Dear Sir or Madam, I am interested in your program.

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Hi,

I have interest in MBA program and I would like to have some detail and sugestion

The detail as below.

Dear sir,

I have interest in your program and I would like to know that the office (study room) of the coming batch (2011) would move to the new bulding and I would like to sugest that application form and its process should make modernization ( because it
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Dear Clive,

Thank you so much for your help
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