Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Please help correct sentences I've attempted to correct?
Could you please tell me if my correction are ok and if not how you would make these sentences grammatical?
- We will be back when the battle resumes/ will resume. BOTH I think?
- When he does that, he will kill him. I know it for a fact. OK
- She is too good to me for me to betray her. OK
- If I am sad when I go to sleep, I sleep bad. OK maybe badly
- What job are you applying for? OK "position" better
- Which other famous actor is blind? OK
- You need to hold out (under) the pressure a little longer. NOT SURE
- I can see/picture the route we need to take in my head. OK
- She lives a little further/farther down the road. FURTHER
- If you were sick, you wouldn't be able to to what you are doing right now. OK I think
- I'm a hypochondriac. I'm not the person these things should be happening to. Not sure
Thank you very much
- We will be back when the battle resumes/ will resume. BOTH I think?
- When he does that, he will kill him. I know it for a fact. OK
- She is too good to me for me to betray her. OK
- If I am sad when I go to sleep, I sleep bad. OK maybe badly
- What job are you applying for? OK "position" better
- Which other famous actor is blind? OK
- You need to hold out (under) the pressure a little longer. NOT SURE
- I can see/picture the route we need to take in my head. OK
- She lives a little further/farther down the road. FURTHER
- If you were sick, you wouldn't be able to to what you are doing right now. OK I think
- I'm a hypochondriac. I'm not the person these things should be happening to. Not sure
Thank you very much
Top answer
I sleep badly. Which job are you applying for? sustain the pressure or maintain the pressure (depend on your intended meaning) I can picture (you can't see in your head) I'm not the person to whom these things should be happening.
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When he does that, he will kill him - may need to reword to clarify "he" versus "he" (same person or two people?)
....I sleep badly.
Which job are you applying for?
...sustain the pressure or maintain the pressure (depend on your intended meaning)
I can picture (you can't see in your head)
I'm not the person to whom these things should be happening.
....I sleep badly.
Which job are you applying for?
...sustain the pressure or maintain the pressure (depend on your intended meaning)
I can picture (you can't see in your head)
I'm not the person to whom these things should be happening.
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