Please help correct my grammar to my friend

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How are you ? Are you busy worked in Brunei ? Yesterday, I saw some your updated photo in your public album. The man who wear a straight line grey T-shirt in your picture no. 044, is your boyfriend ? Our company has a big changed for the personnel matters. May, Jube and Joe will leave soon, Stephen was promoted to General Manger ....., I hope this is a good beginning. How is your business ? Please keep to upload you new photo, and don't forget advise us if one day you will marry. You need to invite all of us to attend your wedding in Brunei, of course included free ticket and meal for us. Finally, I wish you have good business to get more money, always sweet with your boyfriend and always happy. Keep in touch !

Quangtn03 · Accepted Answer

Hello.
I'm learning English. I want to help you with the best I can, but I think it may still have many mistakes. Hope you like it.
How are you ? Are you busy at work in Brunei ? Yesterday, I saw some your updated photos in your public album. The man who wears a straight line grey T-shirt in your picture no. 044 is your boyfriend ? Our company has a big change for the personnel matters. May, Jube and Joe will leave soon, Stephen was promoted to General Manger ....., I hope this is a good beginning. How is your business ? Please keep uploading your new photos, and don't forget to advise us if one day you will marry. You need to invite all of us to attend your wedding in Brunei, of course that included free ticket and meal for us. Finally, I wish you will have the good business to get more money, always be sweet with your boyfriend and always be happy. Keep in touch !

Have a better day.

Anonymous · Answer

Quangtn03Hello.
I'm learning English. I want to help you with the best I can, but I think it may still have many mistakes. Hope you like it.
How are you ? Are you busy worked in Brunei ? Yesterday, I saw some your updated photos in your public album. The man who wears a straight line grey T-shirt in your picture no. 044 is your boyfriend ? Our company has a big change for the personnel matters. May, Jube and Joe will leave soon, Stephen was promoted to General Manger ....., I hope this is a good beginning. How is your business ? Please keep uploading your new photos, and don't forget to advise us if one day you will marry. You need to invite all of us to attend your wedding in Brunei, of course that included free ticket and meal for us. Finally, I wish you will have the good business to get more money, always be sweet with your boyfriend and always be happy. Keep in touch !

Have a better day.

Hi Quangtn, Thanks for your correct. It should "worked" or "at work" ?

Quangtn03 · Answer

Hello.
I think "busy" is an adj so we don't use worked here. As I think I will write : are you busy in Bruney? It's enough.
What do you think of it?

Newbie2007 · Answer

AnonymousHow are you ? Are you busy worked in Brunei ? Yesterday, I saw some your updated photo in your public album. The man who wear a straight line grey T-shirt in your picture no. 044, is your boyfriend ? Our company has a big changed for the personnel matters. May, Jube and Joe will leave soon, Stephen was promoted to General Manger ....., I hope this is a good beginning. How is your business ? Please keep to upload you new photo, and don't forget advise us if one day you will marry. You need to invite all of us to attend your wedding in Brunei, of course included free ticket and meal for us. Finally, I wish you have good business to get more money, always sweet with your boyfriend and always happy. Keep in touch !

How are you ? Are you busy working in Brunei ? Yesterday, I saw some of your updated photos n your public album. Is the man who wore a grey straight line T-shirt in your picture no. 044 your boyfriend ? Our company has a big change of/on/about the personnel matters. In May, Jube and Joe will leave soon, Stephen has been promoted to General Manger ....., I hope this is a good beginning. How is your business ? Please keep on uploading your new photo, and don't forget informing us about when you marry. You need to invite all of us to attend your wedding in Brunei, of course including the free tickets and meals for us. Finally, I wish you would have a good business to get more money, always be sweet with your boyfriend and be happy. Keep in touch !

I've corrected some mistakes. But I'm not sure of the blue words. To quangtn : Hi, you are from VN, aren't you ?

Quangtn03 · Answer

I've corrected some mistakes. But I'm not sure of the blue words. To quangtn : Hi, you are from VN, aren't you ?

. Yeah. I'm Vietnamese. Nice to meet you.

Hey newbie. I have some questions for this passage. (the blue words are ones I am not sure

)

How are you ? Are you busy working (why don't use "at work" here) in Brunei ? Yesterday, I saw some of your updated photos in your public album. Is the man who wore a grey straight line T-shirt in your picture no. 044 your boyfriend ? Our company has a big change of/on/about the personnel matters. In May (May is probably a name?), Jube and Joe will leave soon, Stephen has been (were?) promoted to General Manger ....., I hope this is a good beginning. How is your business ? Please keep (on) uploading (keep doing smt?) your new photos, and don't forget informing us about when you marry. You need to invite all of us to attend your wedding in Brunei, of course including the free tickets and meals for us. Finally, I wish you would (will ?)have a good business to get more money, be always sweet with your boyfriend and be happy. Keep in touch !

May I have your explanations? Thank you very much.

Newbie2007 · Answer

Quangtn03I've corrected some mistakes. But I'm not sure of the blue words. To quangtn : Hi, you are from VN, aren't you ?

. Yeah. I'm Vietnamese. Nice to meet you.

Hey newbie. I have some questions for this passage. (the blue words are ones I am not sure )

How are you ? Are you busy working (why don't use "at work" here) in Brunei ? Yesterday, I saw some of your updated photos in your public album. Is the man who wore a grey straight line T-shirt in your picture no. 044 your boyfriend ? Our company has a big change of/on/about the personnel matters. In May (May is probably a name?), Jube and Joe will leave soon, Stephen has been (were?) promoted to General Manger ....., I hope this is a good beginning. How is your business ? Please keep (on) uploading (keep doing smt?) your new photos, and don't forget informing us about when you marry. You need to invite all of us to attend your wedding in Brunei, of course including the free tickets and meals for us. Finally, I wish you would (will ?)have a good business to get more money, be always sweet with your boyfriend and be happy. Keep in touch !

May I have your explanations? Thank you very much.

Yeah, nice to meet you, too

Yeah, Thanks for your ideas.

They are also ok.

There are many ways of using a verb.

Newbie2007 · Answer

Quangtn03I've corrected some mistakes. But I'm not sure of the blue words. To quangtn : Hi, you are from VN, aren't you ?

. Yeah. I'm Vietnamese. Nice to meet you.

Hey newbie. I have some questions for this passage. (the blue words are ones I am not sure )

How are you ? Are you busy working (why don't use "at work" here) in Brunei ? Yesterday, I saw some of your updated photos in your public album. Is the man who wore a grey straight line T-shirt in your picture no. 044 your boyfriend ? Our company has a big change of/on/about the personnel matters. In May (May is probably a name?), Jube and Joe will leave soon, Stephen has been (were?) promoted to General Manger ....., I hope this is a good beginning. How is your business ? Please keep (on) uploading (keep doing smt?) your new photos, and don't forget informing us about when you marry. You need to invite all of us to attend your wedding in Brunei, of course including the free tickets and meals for us. Finally, I wish you would (will ?)have a good business to get more money, be always sweet with your boyfriend and be happy. Keep in touch !

May I have your explanations? Thank you very much.

Yeah, nice to meet you, too

Yeah, Thanks for your ideas.

They are also ok.

There are many ways of using a verb.

But wish you would have a good business to get more money, be always sweet with your boyfriend and be happy. Keep in touch !

In my opinion, You have to use would and be. It likes a conditional tense.

About be, the above sentence like : I wish to happy. Instead of : I wish be happy or I wish happiness.

Quangtn03 · Answer

Hi newbie.
"I wish you will have..." is a true conditional sentence. I think this is a letter so the writer have a wish for his friend.

The latter is "I wish you will be happy", not "I wish be happy". He write for friend not for himself.

Are you ok? Tell me what do you think?

Newbie2007 · Answer

Quangtn03 Hi newbie.
"I wish you will have..." is a true conditional sentence. I think this is a letter so the writer have a wish for his friend.

The latter is "I wish you will be happy", not "I wish be happy". He write for friend not for himself.

Are you ok? Tell me what do you think?

Hì, the first, I'm sure of using would. You can't use the simple tense.

The latter : "I wish you would be happy" is different from "I wish to be happy (wish + infinitive; NOT bare infinitive). That's right.

-> I wish you would have a great day, be happy and pass the exam well.

Can you make a difference between the followings sentences ?

I wish you would have a good trip, successful in your study.

I wish you woul have a good trip, be sucessful in your study.

The first is wrong because of lack of be. The last is right. But you can say like this "I would you would be happy and healthy (without be)"

Be is a verb.

Do you agree with me on that ?

Newbie2007 · Answer

Quangtn03 Hi newbie.
"I wish you will have..." is a true conditional sentence. I think this is a letter so the writer have a wish for his friend.

The latter is "I wish you will be happy", not "I wish be happy". He write for friend not for himself.

Are you ok? Tell me what do you think?

Hì, the first, I'm sure of using would. You can't use the simple tense.

The latter : "I wish you would be happy" is different from "I wish to be happy (wish + infinitive; NOT bare infinitive). That's right.

-> I wish you would have a great day, be happy and pass the exam well.

Can you make a difference between the followings sentences ?

I wish you would have a good trip, successful in your study.

I wish you woul have a good trip, be sucessful in your study.

The first is wrong because of lack of be. The last is right. But you can say like this "I would you would be happy and healthy (without be)"

Be is a verb.

Do you agree with me on that ?

Please help correct my grammar to my friend

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