Please help check the letter

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0Hi guys, could you please help me check the grammer in the letter listed below? It is a practice before I take the IELTS exam which will come very soon. I will be grateful if you could offer me any suggestion.02br02br02br02br00Dear Sir/Madam,02br02br00I am writing to ask for your help as to my lost shopping bag.02br02br00I went to visit your museum with my friends yesterday morning, where we had a good time. Unfortunately I found I had left my bag of shopping in the museum when I arrived home yesterday afternoon. 02br02br02br02br00The shopping bag is in the colour of blue. It has two cute cartoon characters on the surface. Inside the bag, there is one new brand sweater, and a wallet where has several hundred cash and my student ID card. The student ID card is required emergently, as the final exam is coming in two weeks, and I will not be allowed to attend in the exam without it.02br02br02br02br00I am excessively anxious at the moment. Could you please inform your staff about this lost information? Moreover, could you be kind enough to send the bag to me by express service if it is found? I am ready to pay for the postal charges. My address is : 00 Bay.02br02br02br02br00Your kind assistance will be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to your reply.02br02br02br02br00Yours sincerely,02br02br00Maria0-

Feebs11 · Accepted Answer

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01cite10Mariasun12cite10Hi guys, could you please help me check the grammer in the letter listed below? It is a practice before I take the IELTS exam which will come very soon. I will be grateful if you could offer me any suggestion.12br
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10Dear Sir/Madam,12br
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10I am writing to ask for your help as to my lost shopping bag.12br
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10I went to visit your museum with my friends yesterday morning, where we had a good time. Unfortunately11font10,12font10 10when I arrived home yesterday afternoon11font10, 12font10.10I found I had left my bag of shopping in the museum. 12br
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10The shopping bag is 11del~~10in the colour of 12del~~10blue. It has two cute cartoon characters on the 11del~~11font10surface12font12del~~11font10 outside12font10. Inside the bag, there is one 11font10brand new12font10 sweater, and a wallet 11del~~11font10where has12font12del~~10 11font10containing 12font10several hundred cash and my student ID card. The student ID card is required 11del~~11font10emergently12font12del~~11font10 urgently12font10, as the final exam is coming in two weeks, and I will not be allowed to attend 11del~~10in12del~~10 the exam without it.12br
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10I am 11font10excessively12font11font10 [better : exceedingly]12font10 anxious at the moment. Could you please inform your staff about this lost 11font10information 11font10[property (you have lost a physical item that you own)]12font10 12font10? Moreover, 11font10if it has been found, 12font10could you be kind enough to send the bag to me by express service 11del~~10if it is found12del~~10? I am ready to pay 11del~~10for12del~~10 the postal charges. My address is : 10 Bay.12br
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10Your kind assistance will be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to your reply.12br
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10Yours 11del~~11font10sincerely12font12del~~11font10 faithfully12font10,12br
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10Maria12br
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Mariasun · Answer

0Hi Feebs11, thank you so much for your help. I have learn a lot from the mistakes that are correted by you. I won't be able to find out the mistakes myself. Thanks again. 02br
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