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00My question for the article: What can you tell about a a person from their hairstyle and their clothes? 02br
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00Say it by clothes! 02br
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00Have you ever thought about a person while looking at her/his clothes and hairstyle the first time: “That’s an interesting way to dress. What’s the message behind it?” 02br
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00Just by looking at my friend’s closet you are able to tell many things about their personality. Some of my friends like to wear almost bright instead of dark colours in their closet which tells me they are happy. For me, a very neat and organized closet indicates that the person is well organized and cares about her/his appearance. In contrast, some of my friends do not really care about their appearance. They prefere long worn clothes and it doesn’t make a difference if they are are a little bit dirty. It’s a way for them to express they life in freedom. 02br
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00In addition, people’s hairstyles can also reflect their personality. For example, extreme hairstyles are a way to attract attention and to say you are an individual personality. 02br
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00Let’s face it – everyone has it’s own personality, so everyone likes to dress different. In cause of that, it would be false to categorise a person at the first look – do you agree? 02br
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