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During the time we conducted the survey at beach, I have learned some lessons and obtained a great amount of experiences:Firstly, my English skill is improved very much, especially my pronunciation and listening. Through the mission, I was given an opportunity to contact with many different people from different countries and cultures. I seemed to get mature a lot when I deal with many problems during the task. At the beginning, it was so challenging for me to start a talk with international people and understand their saying, but then, I eventually got used to it and everything gradually became smoothly at last. I think this was really a precious thing that I achieved. Secondly, writing this report impulsed the expansion of my vocabulary as well as my writing skill. This seemed to be the hardest part to me because I was all new to the chart analising and it took couple of time to research more on it. I received a lot of comments from my group members on my report. After many times correcting and adjusting, I hoped that my report would be better at last.And finally, because I presented this report in Microsoft Word, I learned some new computer skills like drawing charts, designing the content…