Please everybody check my cover letter.

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Have my cover letter get errors? if it have please somebody re-fix it. Thanks.

I would like to propose my candidacy for your position of C#/.NET developer which was advertised on the ….. website today.

I'm a highly responsibility and do well with team and am always completing tasks best and put highest target for working. In fact, I have been removed design and code on my application than 19 times. It just be stoped when I saw it's beauty about on design and brief code. My short term career goal is to continue to learn and grow my IT skill and abilitles, and my long term goal is to advance to engineer develop and after senior engineer develop.

I invite you to review my attached resume which will show you that I am a capable and projessional indiviual.

Thanks you cincerly for taking the time to read my profile and aspirations, and I very much look forward to an opportunity to speak to you in more detail regarding this positon.

Yours sincerely,

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Teechr · Accepted Answer

hoang lethienIn fact, I have been removed design and code on my application than 19 times. It just be stoped when I saw it's beauty about on design and brief code.

I have no idea what the above text means!

Hoang lethien · Answer

That mean is " I re-design than 19 times and I just stopped re-design when my application is beauty..."

Teechr · Answer

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to ~~propose my candidacy~~ apply for ~~your~~ the position of C#/.NET Developer which was advertised on the ….. website today.

I'm a highly responsible,expereinced and competent professional ~~ility~~ ~~and do well~~ who thrives within a team and am always completes ~~ing~~ tasks on time and ~~best and put~~ to the highest standard. ~~target for working.~~ In fact, I am a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to designing and writing code. On a recent project, ~~have been removed~~ I changed the design and code ~~on my application~~ more than 19 times. ~~It just be stoped~~ I was only satisfied when I saw that I had a beautifully concise and targeted solution. ~~it's beauty about on design and brief code.~~ My short-term career goal is to continue to learn and grow my IT skills and abilities, ~~and~~ while my long-term goal is to advance to a software engineering role ~~develop~~ and afterwards a senior engineer/developer.

I invite you to review my attached resume which will show you that I am a capable, enthusiastic and professional individual.

Thank you ~~cincerly~~ for taking the time to read my profile and aspirations, and I very much look forward to an opportunity to speak to you in more detail regarding this position.

Yours faithfully, ~~sincerely,~~

Please everybody check my cover letter.

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