0Hi,02br 02br 00Pretending this is a report to the headquarter.02br 02br 00Dear Sir,02br 02br 00We had a successful month with the profit of $xxx,xxx.xx. And this number represent a 20-percent increase over the last month's figure. I feel this healthy figure is due to our hardwork under the slogan of "Serve Fast and Right." The central theme of the slogan is that we should serve our customers promptly but also accurately. We took this theme in consideration of the fact that our morning customers who account for over half of our sales use drive-in windows more than ordering in. We feel this is due to the fact they are mostly working for an employer and thus need to be punctual; but at the same time, they want to have a sound breakfast that will help them get through the morning in an optimum condition. In congnizant (recognition??) of that fact, the store management under my stewardship has been trying to institute a change under the slogan of "Serve Fast and Right." Since then, we had more satisfied customers and more repeat customers, leading to a high rise in our bottom line. We feel that in our industry, achieving a 20-percent increase over the prior is a phenomenal achievement.and we will certainly do our best maintain the successes (the stream of success??) we have been having for the last four months. 0-
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