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Believer Posted 19 years ago
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Please correct this.

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00Enclosed please find the materials that have the information you were asking me for yesterday over a cup of coffee. I hope you will find the materials helpful. Please note that the enclosed materials are not in any practical order and you may have to search for the information you need. 02br
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00Upon receipt of this e-mail, please send me a confirmation regarding the receipt of all the materials contained herein. Also, I would appreciate it if you would send me a feedback as to what you think of the materials.02br
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00I hope you find them helpful.02br
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00Truly,02br
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0 PLEASE find the ENCLOSED materials that have the information you were asking me yesterday over a cup of coffee. }). Please note that they are not in any practical order and you may have to search for the information you need.

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0 PLEASE find the ENCLOSED materials that have the information you were asking me yesterday over a cup of coffee. (I hope you will find them helpful{Repetition at the end, is this really necessary?}). Please note that they are not in any practical order and you may have to search for the information you need. 02br
00Upon receipt of this e-mail, please send me (back) a confirmation r
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