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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

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Please conduct a research over a complete renovation on our lawn bowling greens (greens). Frankly, the long-serving greens and their auxiliary facilities have been found seriously wear and tear in recent years and we have consistently received complaints from the users and the associations about our provision of substandard lawn bowling facilitate. To address the concerns, we have tried to ask for your minor works many times, but all those result in little progress and having a long-term effect. Therefore, we trust that to carry out a thorough renovation on the aging lgreens is definitely a must. Details of areas of the greens to be improved complying the WBG standard are as follows: To replace and upgrade the uneven greens including the trenches, To redesign the session of the greens, To replace the leaking shelter to sustain rain and sunlight. Thank you.
  

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Please conduct a research over a feasibility study into the complete renovation on of our lawn-bowling greens (greens). Frankly, the long-serving greens and their auxiliary facilities have been found seriously deteriorated wear and tear in recent years, and we have consistently received complaints from the users and th