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Essay & Composition Writing
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1. Yesterday, our famility went to a local gallery. That experience has been an enlightening one for me in that I learned how paintings on flowers could affect one's mood as he/she sees them. That was the case for me in that I was in a rather gloomy mood before entering the gallery but after looking at a couple of excellent paintings on flowers, my spirit lifted up.
2. (made-up letter to Santa on a made-up date of December 11th by a young child)
Hi. I am a XXX school student and want you to know that I would like to have a new bike at Christmas, if possible. I did (present perfect tense - have done - not correct?) many good deeds from Janurary 1st till December 10th. I have a good home and supportive parents.
1. Yesterday, our famility went to a local gallery. That experience has been an enlightening one for me in that I learned how paintings on flowers could affect one's mood as he/she sees them. That was the case for me in that I was in a rather gloomy mood before entering the gallery but after looking at a couple of excellent paintings on flowers, my spirit lifted up.
2. (made-up letter to Santa on a made-up date of December 11th by a young child)
Hi. I am a XXX school student and want you to know that I would like to have a new bike at Christmas, if possible. I did (present perfect tense - have done - not correct?) many good deeds from Janurary 1st till December 10th. I have a good home and supportive parents.
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1. Yesterday, our family went to a local gallery. That experience was an enlightening one for me as I learned (realized) how paintings of flowers could affect one's mood by watching them.
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1. Yesterday, our family went to a local gallery. That experience was an enlightening one for me as I learned (realized) how paintings of flowers could affect one's mood by watching them. That was the case for me as I was in a rather gloomy mood before entering the gallery but after looking at a couple of excellent paintings of flowers, it lifted up my spirit.
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