Calvin1chow Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Please correct the unpaid leave letter
Dear All,
Please help to correct the below letter.
Thanks,
Calvin
To: Henry CM Chan, General Manager
From: Jonah Wong, Marketing Manager
Date: 7 March 2007
Subject: Request for Unpaid Leave
I wish to apply for unpaid leave effective from April 1, 2007 to April 10, 2007 inclusive.
My sister will get married and she wants me to go to the wedding. Hence I will like you to approve my request.
I will finish my project before I go. My routine task should be delegated to my assistant, John. If there is any urgent matter, they can reach me either by long distance call or E-mail.
Jonah Wong
Please help to correct the below letter.
Thanks,
Calvin
To: Henry CM Chan, General Manager
From: Jonah Wong, Marketing Manager
Date: 7 March 2007
Subject: Request for Unpaid Leave
I wish to apply for unpaid leave effective from April 1, 2007 to April 10, 2007 inclusive.
My sister will get married and she wants me to go to the wedding. Hence I will like you to approve my request.
I will finish my project before I go. My routine task should be delegated to my assistant, John. If there is any urgent matter, they can reach me either by long distance call or E-mail.
Jonah Wong
Top answer
Hi Calvin, Seems pretty good. I've offered a few changes. Best wishes, Clive To: Henry C.
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Hi Calvin,
Seems pretty good. I've offered a few changes.
Best wishes, Clive
To: Henry C. M. Chan, General Manager
From: Jonah Wong, Marketing Manager
Date: 7 March 2007
Subject: Request f
Seems pretty good. I've offered a few changes.
Best wishes, Clive
To: Henry C. M. Chan, General Manager
From: Jonah Wong, Marketing Manager
Date: 7 March 2007
Subject: Request f
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