SHD Posted 17 years ago
As you requested, the following items have been delivered to the site in May, and delivery notes relating to these items has been given you for the client's approval, but we haven't yet received the signed delivery notes. so please arrange for the hand over of signed delivery notes to us at the earliest.
Please note that the "Delivery Note" is a very valuable fact for incorporation in the final billing, and also, it is one of our major procedure to keep the records for in & out items.
Grammar
Please correct the following sentences
As you requested, the following items have been delivered to the site in May, and delivery notes relating to these items has been given you for the client's approval, but we haven't yet received the signed delivery notes. so please arrange for the hand over of signed delivery notes to us at the earliest.
Please note that the "Delivery Note" is a very valuable fact for incorporation in the final billing, and also, it is one of our major procedure to keep the records for in & out items.
Top answer
SHD: Please try to write shorter sentences. That will improve your writing a lot. The first on contains several ideas and is what we call a "run on" sentence.
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SHD: Please try to write shorter sentences. That will improve your writing a lot. The first on contains several ideas and is what we call a "run on" sentence.
As you requested, the following items have been delivered to the site in May. Delivery notes relating to these items havehas been given to you for the client's approval, but we haven't yet
As you requested, the following items have been delivered to the site in May. Delivery notes relating to these items have
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