SpoonfedBaby Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Please, correct my translation: Neil Young
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00 I translated a short news article from French to English. 00 00 Please, would you correct my translation? 02 br
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00 It was the legendary rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert 00 around 00 . He interpreted his rock hymn to the freedom, 01 i 00 Rockin' In The Free World 02 i 00 . 00 00 That was Neil Young first show since he was a victim of aneurism earlier this year. 02 br
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00 C'est la légende du rock Neil Young qui a terminé le concert géant vers 21 heures. Il a interprété son hymne rock à la liberté, 01 i 00 Rockin' In The Free World 02 i 00 . Il s'agissait du premier spectacle de Neil Young depuis qu'il a été victime d'un anévrisme, plus tôt cette année. 02 br
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00 I translated a short news article from French to English. 00 00 Please, would you correct my translation? 02 br
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00 It was the legendary rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert 00 around 00 . He interpreted his rock hymn to the freedom, 01 i 00 Rockin' In The Free World 02 i 00 . 00 00 That was Neil Young first show since he was a victim of aneurism earlier this year. 02 br
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00 C'est la légende du rock Neil Young qui a terminé le concert géant vers 21 heures. Il a interprété son hymne rock à la liberté, 01 i 00 Rockin' In The Free World 02 i 00 . Il s'agissait du premier spectacle de Neil Young depuis qu'il a été victime d'un anévrisme, plus tôt cette année. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much, 02 br
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0 It was the legendary rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert 00 around 00 9 pm 00 . 02 br 02 br 00 Here are my suggestions: 02 br 02 br 00 It was the legendary rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert 00 around 00 9 pm 00 . 02 br 02 br 00 I'm not sure about using the term "interpreted" - is it significant in the French?
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0 And in spite of the dictionary, I'd save 'legendary' for someone who has died or whose glory is definitely in the past, SFB. 02 br
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00 It was the 01 b 00 famous 02 b 00 rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert 00 around 00 9 pm 00 . He interpreted his rock hymn 01 b 00 to freedom 02 b 00 , 01 i 00 Rockin' In The Free World 02 i 00 . 00 01 b 00 This 02 b 00 was Neil Young 01 b
00 It was the 01 b 00 famous 02 b 00 rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert 00 around 00 9 pm 00 . He interpreted his rock hymn 01 b 00 to freedom 02 b 00 , 01 i 00 Rockin' In The Free World 02 i 00 . 00 01 b 00 This 02 b 00 was Neil Young 01 b
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