Kyorochan Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please correct my introduction :)
Hello.
I wrote an introduction of my essay about foodborne illnedd and food allergy.
I want you to check my grammar. Please!!
Thank you!
How to deal with foodborne illness and food allergy
Foodborne illness and food allergy are increasing at advanced nations particularly in the 20th century. Foods, drinks and air are very important for us to live. We have to take nourishment and water necessary to maintain health. However, there are problems with the foods and the drinks that we are always eating and drinking. Patients for the foods and the drinks are increasing right not more than the past. The illnesses by food are divided into two big categories, which are foodborne illness and food allergy.
I wrote an introduction of my essay about foodborne illnedd and food allergy.
I want you to check my grammar. Please!!
Thank you!
How to deal with foodborne illness and food allergy
Foodborne illness and food allergy are increasing at advanced nations particularly in the 20th century. Foods, drinks and air are very important for us to live. We have to take nourishment and water necessary to maintain health. However, there are problems with the foods and the drinks that we are always eating and drinking. Patients for the foods and the drinks are increasing right not more than the past. The illnesses by food are divided into two big categories, which are foodborne illness and food allergy.
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Instances of Foodborne illness and food allergy are increasing to remain healthy "at advanced nations" -- Do you mean in developed countries? What do you mean by "Patients for the foods and the drinks are increasing right not more than the past"?
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Instances of Foodborne illness and food allergy are increasing
to remain healthy
"at advanced nations" -- Do you mean in developed countries?
What do you mean by "Patients for the foods and the drinks are increasing right not more than the past"?
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