Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
please correct my gramma...thank you very much.
When I was a little girl I always liked yummy food.
These yummy food including chocolate?ice cream?candy?cookie…etc.
For my healthy, mother always did not allow me eating much jungle food ,
I always ate them secretly . Therefore I was a chubby .
Once time I had a toothache ,I remembered that I cried loudly and threw anything near my side .
Mother scolded me but took me to see the dentist.
He pull one of my teeth out and saved me from the pain.
From this experience, I did not eat yummy food too much ,
and always remembered to brush my teeth after eating.
These yummy food including chocolate?ice cream?candy?cookie…etc.
For my healthy, mother always did not allow me eating much jungle food ,
I always ate them secretly . Therefore I was a chubby .
Once time I had a toothache ,I remembered that I cried loudly and threw anything near my side .
Mother scolded me but took me to see the dentist.
He pull one of my teeth out and saved me from the pain.
From this experience, I did not eat yummy food too much ,
and always remembered to brush my teeth after eating.
Top answer
When I was a little girl I always liked yummy food. cookies…etc. For my health, mother never allowed me to eat much junk food So I always ate them secretly.
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When I was a little girl I always liked yummy food.
These yummy foods included chocolate?ice cream?candy?cookies…etc.
For my health, mother never allowed me to eat much junk food
So I always ate them secretly. Therefore I was chubby.
One time I had a toothache - I remember that I cried loudly and threw anything that was nearby.
Mother scolded me but to
These yummy foods included chocolate?ice cream?candy?cookies…etc.
For my health, mother never allowed me to eat much junk food
So I always ate them secretly. Therefore I was chubby.
One time I had a toothache - I remember that I cried loudly and threw anything that was nearby.
Mother scolded me but to
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