Neo0 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please correct my essay
Hi everybody,
I've just watched a film named "Diary of a wimpy kid".
I wrote some review about that film.
Please correct it for me.
Thank you!
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"There're a lot of movie about middle school and kid and I've just watched a nice film named "Diary of a wimpy kid".
That's very interesting!
It told about two kids Grey and Rowley.
Grey is a active kid but he don't know how to make friend.
While Rowley is a big kid. Yeah but he is funny and very natural.
Grey and Rowley join in the new class at middle school.
In this class there're many special kid. Some kid give oneself airs. Some kid are shy...But they're all nice kid.
All the things began when Rowley broke his hand and the fault was Grey.
But then Rowley become a hot boy. A famous kid because he is funny. He also is a cartoon artist.
Then Grey was envy with Rowley and their friendship was broken.
After many things misunderstand, final they're best friends.
That's a nice story."
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I've just watched a film named "Diary of a wimpy kid".
I wrote some review about that film.
Please correct it for me.
Thank you!
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"There're a lot of movie about middle school and kid and I've just watched a nice film named "Diary of a wimpy kid".
That's very interesting!
It told about two kids Grey and Rowley.
Grey is a active kid but he don't know how to make friend.
While Rowley is a big kid. Yeah but he is funny and very natural.
Grey and Rowley join in the new class at middle school.
In this class there're many special kid. Some kid give oneself airs. Some kid are shy...But they're all nice kid.
All the things began when Rowley broke his hand and the fault was Grey.
But then Rowley become a hot boy. A famous kid because he is funny. He also is a cartoon artist.
Then Grey was envy with Rowley and their friendship was broken.
After many things misunderstand, final they're best friends.
That's a nice story."
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Top answer
There are a lot of movies and kid It was very interesting. / It tells the story of two kids, ... an active he doesn't know make friends While Rowley is a big kid but he is funny and ...
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There are a lot of movies
and kid
It was very interesting.
It is about.../ It tells the story of two kids, ...
an active
he doesn't know
make friends
While Rowley is a big kid but he is funny and ...
join the new class in the middle of the school year.
there are many special kids.
Some kids give themselves airs.
Some kids are shy
It was very interesting.
It is about.../ It tells the story of two kids, ...
an active
he doesn't know
make friends
join the new class in the middle of the school year.
there are many special kids.
Some kids give themselves airs.
Some kids are shy
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