Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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please correct my email
0 Hi, i would appreciate if you could corect my email. 02 br
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00 00 Thank you for keeping me informed of positions available. 02 br
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00 00 I am writing to you to let you know that there has been a slight change to when I 00 00 can start a new job. As I was offered a temporary job I will not be able to start work until May4. 02 br
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00 I look forward to hearing from you. 02 br
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00 00 Best regards, 02 br
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00 00 I am writing to you to let you know that there has been a slight change to when I 00 00 can start a new job. As I was offered a temporary job I will not be able to start work until May4. 02 br
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00 I look forward to hearing from you. 02 br
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0 From the way you sounded, you have been offered a permanent position by a company but at the same time, you have accepted a temporary position with another company. 00 00 Telling one employer to keep the position open for you while you are working for another is not a smart thing to do IMO. 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 Dear *** 02 br 02 br 00 Thank you for allowing me the opportunity and keeping me informed of the available position.
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0 From the way you sounded, you have been offered a permanent position by a company but at the same time, you have accepted a temporary position with another company. Is this scenario correct? 00 00 Telling one employer to keep the position open for you while you are working for another is not a smart thing to do IMO. 02 img
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