Please correct my CV. Thanks

Would you please correct my CV? Thank you.

Dear Human Resources Manager,

Application for the position of Supervisor

I was very interested to learn that you are looking for a supervisor for XXX (retailer shop)which will be opened in XXX in early 2007 and would like to be considered for this posit.

I have more than four years' experience in being the front-line worker and shop assistant in XXX (previous retailer shop). My responsibilities include achieving the daily target sales, maintaining the routine operation for the shop as well as training and supervising the new colleagues, in which I have gained good leadership and management skills. In addition, my experience in being Home Furniture Consultant offered me an opportunity to understand the constructions of buildings and the needs of different customers.

I am an independent worker but also play well in team, and I enjoy very much every aspect for retailer shop. I am confident that my practical work experiences in retailer shop and strong communication skill have well prepared me for making an immediate contribution to your company. I believe that I am capable to take the responsibilities of this supervisory position.

I have enclosed a copy of my resume detailing my personal data and qualifications for your kind reference. I would be grateful if you would consider me for an interview. Please contact me at my mobile for interview. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,