Up Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Please correct my answers.
Some line in the passage are correct, and some have a word which shouldn't be there.
Freshwater fish have a similar life cycle to birds. The female fish lays 0. v
eggs but very few of species show any mother-care to their young. Fish 00. of
are cold-blooded creatures, so it is left as to the water temperature to give 1. as
the heat that it encourages the egg to hatch into the “fry”, which is the 2. it
name given to young fish. Small fish crowd together for protection and 3. v
how to learn all the other behavior that is necessary for their survival. 4. how
Only very few them learn to escape the attentions of larger fish or many 5. them
other predators who live alongside of water. Fish continue to grow 6. of
throughout the most of their lives. Unlike animals or birds, there is no 7. v
easily seen child or adult part to their growing up. Fish from healthy 8. up
waters, where there is plentiful food, will reach to bigger sizes quicker 9. to
than their less fortunate fellows, who strive to grow in a polluted stretch 10. v
of water.
Freshwater fish have a similar life cycle to birds. The female fish lays 0. v
eggs but very few of species show any mother-care to their young. Fish 00. of
are cold-blooded creatures, so it is left as to the water temperature to give 1. as
the heat that it encourages the egg to hatch into the “fry”, which is the 2. it
name given to young fish. Small fish crowd together for protection and 3. v
how to learn all the other behavior that is necessary for their survival. 4. how
Only very few them learn to escape the attentions of larger fish or many 5. them
other predators who live alongside of water. Fish continue to grow 6. of
throughout the most of their lives. Unlike animals or birds, there is no 7. v
easily seen child or adult part to their growing up. Fish from healthy 8. up
waters, where there is plentiful food, will reach to bigger sizes quicker 9. to
than their less fortunate fellows, who strive to grow in a polluted stretch 10. v
of water.
Top answer
How do the numbers relate to the passage?
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I still don't understand.
eg Does 0. mean that you think the word 'lay' should not be there?
What do the ticks mean?
eg Does 0. mean that you think the word 'lay' should not be there?
What do the ticks mean?
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CliveI still don't understand.eg Does 0. mean that you think the word 'lay' should not be there?What do the ticks mean?0, 00,1,...... are just the numbers used to mark the lines. (You do not need to notice much).
If the number of a line is ticked (v) that means the line is correct and it doesn't have redundant word.
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The simplest approach is for you to simply edit the passage to make the English correct, and then show it to me so that I can check it. OK?
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Ha ha. I see what you mean. Let me put it another way. 
Freshwater fish have a similar life cycle to birds. The female f
Freshwater fish have a similar life cycle to birds. The female f
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Freshwater fish have a similar life cycle to birds. The female fish lays eggs but very few species show any mother-care to their young. Fish are cold-blooded creatures, so it is left to the water temperature to give the heat that encourages the egg to hatch into the “fry”, which is the name given to young fish. Small fish crowd together for protection and to learn all the other behavior that is ne
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Thank you. I will correct my mistake.
Sorry for disturbing so much.
You are so patient.
Sorry for disturbing so much.
You are so patient.
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You are pretty naughty, Up.
I don't know why Clive can't understand your question.
It's very easy to understand.
I don't know why Clive can't understand your question.
It's very easy to understand.
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