Selva Bloom Posted 10 years ago
Business & Finance
please correct me
i wrote some sentence for advertismant for my business. please correct that and make it more attractive.
"get a onlline tution for all subjects by (company name). make it easy and enjoy to learn! Signup now for a free class! "
"get a onlline tution for all subjects by (company name). make it easy and enjoy to learn! Signup now for a free class! "
Top answer
I wrote some sentence s for an advertisem e nt for my business. P lease correct th em and make it more attractive. "G et a online tu i tion for (or in ) all subjects by from (or at ) (company name).
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I wrote some sentences for an advertisement for my business. Please correct them and make it more attractive.
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