Ellisa Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
please, correct any errors in the short answer!
I believe the adjective “hard-working” best fits me. As I recognized earlier that I don’t excel in my studies, I started to spend more time and effort on my studies. I usually spent the time in-between classes in the library studying so my college friends nicknamed me “library keeper”. Naturally, my grades improved a lot.
I would also say that I’m energetic and I love teaching. While I was making my pocket money by tutoring, I had this challenging student. He had very low self-esteem and had no interest in any subject. I didn’t want to waste time with the absent-minded student, so I started to take measures. I put much effort to make my class meaningful to him. I prepared short English cartoons to motivate him to listen to my lesson. Also, I drew pictures and even colored them to explain English tense and so forth. Finally, he voluntarily asked me to teach him English with his textbook. You can’t imagine how I felt at that moment.
I would also say that I’m energetic and I love teaching. While I was making my pocket money by tutoring, I had this challenging student. He had very low self-esteem and had no interest in any subject. I didn’t want to waste time with the absent-minded student, so I started to take measures. I put much effort to make my class meaningful to him. I prepared short English cartoons to motivate him to listen to my lesson. Also, I drew pictures and even colored them to explain English tense and so forth. Finally, he voluntarily asked me to teach him English with his textbook. You can’t imagine how I felt at that moment.
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This is my opinion about your writing, i saw many mistakes that i couldn't correct them it short, i will show you in full. You can consult my idea, thankyou for reading. I believe that " hard-working" adjective is right to describe me.
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This is my opinion about your writing, i saw many mistakes that i couldn't correct them it short, i will show you in full.
You can consult my idea, thankyou for reading.
I believe that " hard-working" adjective is right to describe me. When i recognize that i dont get improve in study, i will try to spend more time and work hard on my study. I usually spend time in class and in library
You can consult my idea, thankyou for reading.
I believe that " hard-working" adjective is right to describe me. When i recognize that i dont get improve in study, i will try to spend more time and work hard on my study. I usually spend time in class and in library
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Omigod, that is not good at all, xuxumoni! Elissa's English is much better than yours. Please ask questions here rather than trying to answer them.
I believe the adjective “hard-working” best fits me. As I recognized early that I did not excel in my classes, I started to spend more time and effort on my studies. I usually spent the time between classes in
I believe the adjective “hard-working” best fits me. As I recognized early that I did not excel in my classes, I started to spend more time and effort on my studies. I usually spent the time between classes in
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xuxumoniHmm, could you show me where did i wrong?Simply compare your text with mine.
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If i hadn't answered, i wouln't have known my writing was wrong, i didn't say my answer is right, you should stop telling people what to do
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Moderators are here to tell contributors what to do, xuxumoni, particularly when their contributions are counterproductive. Do not post answers above your level of competence.
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