Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Please comment few english sentences, Thank you!
First part:
During my years at school I have taken part in programming contests and Olympics in Informatics. Preparation for them and for the State exam gave me the understanding of different parts of computer science.
Second part:
In my future studies I would like to receive more knowledge on such subjects as internet programming, e-commerce and the creation of projects (from both computer and business sides).
Thank you very much for your time.
During my years at school I have taken part in programming contests and Olympics in Informatics. Preparation for them and for the State exam gave me the understanding of different parts of computer science.
Second part:
In my future studies I would like to receive more knowledge on such subjects as internet programming, e-commerce and the creation of projects (from both computer and business sides).
Thank you very much for your time.
Top answer
I don't see anything wrong. " AND "In my future studies I would like to gain more knowledge about such subjects as . .
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I don't see anything wrong. I might say, "Preparation for these endeavors and for the State exam gave me an understanding of different aspects of computer science."
AND "In my future studies I would like to gain more knowledge about such subjects as . . . "
Somehow "receiving knowledge" strikes me as a one-way proposition. "Gaining knowledge"
AND "In my future studies I would like to gain more knowledge about such subjects as . . . "
Somehow "receiving knowledge" strikes me as a one-way proposition. "Gaining knowledge"
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