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Aceshark123 Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
Please check my MOTIVATION LETTER FOR univs in Sweden!!!???
this is my first attempt at writing a motivation letter so please help me & check my letter. i would be very grateful if u could show the things that need correction. its a bit urgent.so help!!
MOTIVATION LETTER
I am Venkataraman. N, 23 years of age, an Indian. I am applying for the Master’s Program in Nuclear Engineering and Automotive Engineering in Sweden. I am a final year student in Sri Sairam Engineering College (Anna University), Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India of Bachelor of Engineering in Mechanical Engineering.
In my university studies I learnt the fundamentals of technical engineering and the experience and knowledge that came with it. At the end of my second year, I found my interests in Automobile systems and Energy needs. I will finish my bachelor study by May 2009 and I am now working on a team project, to develop an ALL TERRAIN VEHICLE for a competition named SAE BAJA 2009 in which I am a vehicle technician as well as heading the design team. It was knowledge galore in this project which I gained from it immensely.
I always wanted to go and study abroad. Despite acquiring a good command over my English language I have always strived to improve my vocabulary, writing and communicating skills. Studying in a foreign country would help me a lot in this process and I will not have difficulties in studying any subjects taught in English. At the same time, I could discover a new culture; meet people with a different perspectives. Of course it would give me the opportunity to re-discover myself and jump a level higher. Personally, I am a person with a high perseverance level, someone who is motivated and ambitious. My teacher and supervisor know me as a courteous and resourceful student and my classmates know me as a light-hearted friend and an enthusiastic coworker. The very reason I always wanted to study abroad was to explore the technology and the quality of education which countries like USA, UK, Sweden, Germany, Denmark, Norway, and Finland etc. have an edge over my country. Sweden is not only famous of its technology in Science, but also the education system.
I always thought higher education in Sweden would enhance my knowledge and hone my co-curricular and extra-curricular skills. I always had a keen interest in nuclear science since my high school and I believe Sweden would be the best place to achieve my career objectives. The alarming need for nuclear and other renewable sources of energy in my country as well as other countries in the world has become a catalyst for my interests in nuclear physics. With its Advanced Courses and Real Time Projects, I believe this course would give me ample opportunity to fulfill my aspirations. After completing my masters program I wish to have the opportunity to take a PhD programme in Sweden in the future.
A term spent abroad, the established relationships, and the gained experience would enrich my personality which could give me an edge over other people in my quest to achieve excellence.
Yours Faithfully
MOTIVATION LETTER
I am Venkataraman. N, 23 years of age, an Indian. I am applying for the Master’s Program in Nuclear Engineering and Automotive Engineering in Sweden. I am a final year student in Sri Sairam Engineering College (Anna University), Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India of Bachelor of Engineering in Mechanical Engineering.
In my university studies I learnt the fundamentals of technical engineering and the experience and knowledge that came with it. At the end of my second year, I found my interests in Automobile systems and Energy needs. I will finish my bachelor study by May 2009 and I am now working on a team project, to develop an ALL TERRAIN VEHICLE for a competition named SAE BAJA 2009 in which I am a vehicle technician as well as heading the design team. It was knowledge galore in this project which I gained from it immensely.
I always wanted to go and study abroad. Despite acquiring a good command over my English language I have always strived to improve my vocabulary, writing and communicating skills. Studying in a foreign country would help me a lot in this process and I will not have difficulties in studying any subjects taught in English. At the same time, I could discover a new culture; meet people with a different perspectives. Of course it would give me the opportunity to re-discover myself and jump a level higher. Personally, I am a person with a high perseverance level, someone who is motivated and ambitious. My teacher and supervisor know me as a courteous and resourceful student and my classmates know me as a light-hearted friend and an enthusiastic coworker. The very reason I always wanted to study abroad was to explore the technology and the quality of education which countries like USA, UK, Sweden, Germany, Denmark, Norway, and Finland etc. have an edge over my country. Sweden is not only famous of its technology in Science, but also the education system.
I always thought higher education in Sweden would enhance my knowledge and hone my co-curricular and extra-curricular skills. I always had a keen interest in nuclear science since my high school and I believe Sweden would be the best place to achieve my career objectives. The alarming need for nuclear and other renewable sources of energy in my country as well as other countries in the world has become a catalyst for my interests in nuclear physics. With its Advanced Courses and Real Time Projects, I believe this course would give me ample opportunity to fulfill my aspirations. After completing my masters program I wish to have the opportunity to take a PhD programme in Sweden in the future.
A term spent abroad, the established relationships, and the gained experience would enrich my personality which could give me an edge over other people in my quest to achieve excellence.
Yours Faithfully
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