Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Please check my job application help and thank
4 points
-When and where did you learn about the job offer at a holiday camp
-they'd like to do two jobs
-Describe your skills, experience
-ask for sending information about accommodation and meal
120-150 word
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to apply for he position of counsellor or dance instructor as advertised in The News on the 12 September 2009
I enclose my CV with details of my work experience. As you can see, I have nerly three years' experience of working on a dence school. I have no experience as a counsellor but I have worked as baby-sister, additionally in last year I completed a course tutor colonies. I am very polite, friendly and responsible. I have excellent communication skills. I believe is a very important quality for the position of counsellor or dance instructor.
Could you give me more information about a accommodatio and meal during the cump
I hope that my application will be taken into consideration. If you feel that my qualifications meet your requirements I am available for an interview at your convenience.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
XYZ
-When and where did you learn about the job offer at a holiday camp
-they'd like to do two jobs
-Describe your skills, experience
-ask for sending information about accommodation and meal
120-150 word
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to apply for he position of counsellor or dance instructor as advertised in The News on the 12 September 2009
I enclose my CV with details of my work experience. As you can see, I have nerly three years' experience of working on a dence school. I have no experience as a counsellor but I have worked as baby-sister, additionally in last year I completed a course tutor colonies. I am very polite, friendly and responsible. I have excellent communication skills. I believe is a very important quality for the position of counsellor or dance instructor.
Could you give me more information about a accommodatio and meal during the cump
I hope that my application will be taken into consideration. If you feel that my qualifications meet your requirements I am available for an interview at your convenience.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
XYZ
Top answer
Dear Sir / Madam I am writing to apply for the position of counsellor or dance instructor as advertised in The News on the 12 September 2009. I enclose my CV with details of my work experience. As you can see, I have nerly three years experience of working at a dance school.
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Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing to apply for the position of counsellor or dance instructor as advertised in The News on the 12 September 2009.
I enclose my CV with details of my work experience. As you can see, I have nerly three years experience of working at a dance school. I have no experience as a counsellor but I have worked as a child minder, additionally in last year, I co
I am writing to apply for the position of counsellor or dance instructor as advertised in The News on the 12 September 2009.
I enclose my CV with details of my work experience. As you can see, I have nerly three years experience of working at a dance school. I have no experience as a counsellor but I have worked as a child minder, additionally in last year, I co
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Anon, check your spelling.
The. Counselor. Dance. Nearly. Look for other mistakes.
Leave a blank line between your paragraphs.
It's two positions, so make that plural.
I have enclosed or I am enclosing.
The. Counselor. Dance. Nearly. Look for other mistakes.
Leave a blank line between your paragraphs.
It's two positions, so make that plural.
I have enclosed or I am enclosing.
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