Nana555 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
;) please check my grammer in this mssg.. thank you in advice
Dear Dr. Leonard,
I already sent emails to my professors at Khartoom University for requesting a recommendation letters last week and I'm waiting their response. Once I get the unsealed letters from them, I will send them all including CV, the Research intersts letter (I chose first one of your options), and the transcript of khartoom University , all in one envelop to admission office.
About sending the same email twice to you, that time I was not satisfied to stop sending an email to you for just did not receive any response from you at the first time. I was hoping to recieve email even if just saying that you already have enough students or there is no room in you lab, but I was very happy to recieve your email and so excited to send you back and complete my papers especially because it will be in the field that I like and I really want be more knowgble in the plant field, I really thank you to give me this apportunity to be apart in your lab team.
I hope you can provide me some useful links, so I can read them in my free time
I already sent emails to my professors at Khartoom University for requesting a recommendation letters last week and I'm waiting their response. Once I get the unsealed letters from them, I will send them all including CV, the Research intersts letter (I chose first one of your options), and the transcript of khartoom University , all in one envelop to admission office.
About sending the same email twice to you, that time I was not satisfied to stop sending an email to you for just did not receive any response from you at the first time. I was hoping to recieve email even if just saying that you already have enough students or there is no room in you lab, but I was very happy to recieve your email and so excited to send you back and complete my papers especially because it will be in the field that I like and I really want be more knowgble in the plant field, I really thank you to give me this apportunity to be apart in your lab team.
I hope you can provide me some useful links, so I can read them in my free time
Top answer
Dear nana555, Here is your letter. I made a few changes for you. I hope this is what you need.
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Dear nana555,
Here is your letter. I made a few changes for you. I hope this is what you need.
Dear Dr.Leonard,
Last week, I sent emails to my professors at Khartoom University requesting recommendation letters from them; I am waiting for their responses. Once I receive their unsealed letters, I will send them with my CV, the research interests letter (I chose the fi
Here is your letter. I made a few changes for you. I hope this is what you need.
Dear Dr.Leonard,
Last week, I sent emails to my professors at Khartoom University requesting recommendation letters from them; I am waiting for their responses. Once I receive their unsealed letters, I will send them with my CV, the research interests letter (I chose the fi
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Thank you sooo much for your perfect correction and thank you for your time
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