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Khm1710 Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please check my grammar

First we look into perspective of 'women's education'. Because CPS students are Younger generation, they regard women receiving higher education as positive. They think opportunity of education is given equally to men and women regardless of gender. And girl students said because higher education makes better treatment in workplaces, so they consider women's education is very important.
However our grandparents who are relatively old had different view as compared with younger generation. They think women's education is unnecessary. In there view they think earning money is man's job, do house work is woman's duty. And in fact women's education contribute to late marriage and low birthrate, elder people worried about that.
  

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First, Let us look into the concept of 'women's education'. As CPS students are of today's generation, they regard women receiving higher education as a positive factor . They think it is good that educational opportunities are available equally to men and women .

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First, Let us look into the concept of 'women's education'. As CPS students are of today's generation, they regard women receiving higher education as a positive factor. They think