Please check my cover letter, Seeking employment in as IT pro in investment industry

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XXX INVESTMENTS L.P.addressSincerely,

Feebs11 · Accepted Answer

xakep2Manager, Personnel Department,
*** INVESTMENTS L.P.
address

Dear sir or madam,

I understand that *** INVESTMENTS hires computer programmers who are interested in implementation and support of software used in investment and risk management. I learned about the *** INVESTMENTS while browsing Dr. D's web-site. I am very interested in a computer programmer position with *** INVESTMENTS, and believe that my skills and work experience are making me a competitive candidate for such position.

I graduated with M.S. in Computer Information Sciences in December 2007. I am currently employed full time with YYY. My experience there includes Financial Management software and ETL software development. I believe that this experience and my strong academic background in computer science have given me ~~extensive foundation~~ a sound foundation for developing software solutions for investment and risk management. Throughout my career I have worked with diverse technologies and platforms including C++, Java EE, MySQL 5.x, Unix.

I strongly believe that my passion for writing high quality code and solving challenging problems combined with my experience in software development would make me a valuable contributor to *** INVESTMENTS. Enclosed is a copy of my resume, which more fully details my qualifications. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to receiving your reply.

Sincerely,

Otherwise it looks fine.

Xakep2 · Answer

thanks Feebs11.

I usually miss/add extra commas. Was I correct this time?

Please check my cover letter, Seeking employment in as IT pro in investment industry

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