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Riyasknr Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Please check my bank letter....

Dear friends...
I’m complaining bank branch manager to head office. Please check my letter and let me know my grammar mistakes...


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21.06.2008

Dear Sir,



I'm (Mohamed Riyasudeen) holding SB account (10721555221) in your bank since August 2004.



Last two years I didn't use my bank account. Now I would like to continue account that's why, frist of this month I spoke to bank manager. He said, immediately you put minimum balance Rs.1000. That's why, I deposited Rs.2500 to my account on 3rd June 2008. Yesterday I went to bank regarding Online Banking Service. I gave Online banking application to bank manager. He says... Why do u want online service?... you are putting 300, 500... First you keep your minimum balance. Why you are coming often to bank. He is talking like unrespectable. I said, already I deposited Rs.2500. He is not hearing my words. He didn’t give proper answer to me. Please tell him to talk kindly to customers. Please accept my online banking application and active my online banking service soon as possible.



I’m very appreciating your early action and promptly service.



Thanking you…



Regards,

Ur’s riya
  

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Dear friends...

I’m complaining bank branch manager to head office. Please check my letter and let me know my grammar mistakes...

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21.06.2008

Dear Sir,



I'm (<<name removed by moderator>>) holding SB account (<<number removed by moderator>>) i
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HI Sir realy i am confused by you letter Becouce, You talk about three manager. First manager, you want to informe the account to him, second who told deposite Rs1000, third who didn't respect to you.
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Dear friend...

I wrote... Only one bank manager, not three managers. Frist time he spoke to me kindly. Second time he get angry with me.

Ur's roua
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21.06.2008

Dear Sir,



I'm (<<name removed by moderator>>) holding SB account (<<number removed by moderator>>) in your bank since August 2004.



Last two years I didn't use my bank account. Now I would like to continue account that's why, frist of this month I spoke to bank manager. He said, immediately you put minimum balance Rs.
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Last two years I didn't have not use my bank account.

///talk kindly to with customers// this is better
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Hello Riyasknr

Never post information in the forums. Just leave a blank space.

Dear Sir,

My name is <<name>> and my SB account number is <<number>>. I have been a customer of your bank since August 2004, although I have not used this account for the last two years.

Recently, I wanted to use my account, so on the first of the month, I spo
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Say:
I’m complaining to the head office about the bank branch manager . Please check my letter and correct my grammar mistakes.

~R

(Can you change the title of this thread?)

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Dear Sir,
I have held SB account (10721555221) in your bank since August 2004.

For the last two years I haven't used this account, but now I would like to put it to use. On the first of this month I spoke to your manager, who told me that I needed to deposit a minimum balance of Rs.1000. I deposited Rs.250
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Thanks my dear friends.... Your sincere replies....

Please give me a correct Subject for this letter. Is it correct subject (Misbehaviour Branch Manager!) ???

Ur's riya
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RiyasknrDear friends...
I’m complaining bank branch manager to head office. Please check my letter and let me know my grammar mistakes...






Say:
I am complaining about the branch bank manager to the head office. Please check my letter and correct my grammar mistakes.

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