Mr1bin Posted 15 years ago
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I think that traveling by myself is better than traveling with a tour group.
First of all, I don't want to be bound by time/a schedule.
If I traveled in a tour group led by a tour guide, I would have to follow the schedule of the tour,
If I travel in a tour group led by a tour guide, I will have to follow the schedule of the tour,
so I will miss what I really want to do and see.
Another reason is that I would like to do an adventure travel, because it provides me with a chance to understand new places.
For these reasons, I think that traveling by myself is better than with a tour group.
First of all, I don't want to be bound by time/a schedule.
If I traveled in a tour group led by a tour guide, I would have to follow the schedule of the tour,
If I travel in a tour group led by a tour guide, I will have to follow the schedule of the tour,
so I will miss what I really want to do and see.
Another reason is that I would like to do an adventure travel, because it provides me with a chance to understand new places.
For these reasons, I think that traveling by myself is better than with a tour group.
Top answer
Hello! " understand new places" - get to know; see; learn about "understand" is not used for places, generally. And in this context you could perhaps use one of my suggestions.
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Hello!
"understand new places" - get to know; see; learn about
"understand" is not used for places, generally. And in this context you could perhaps use one of my suggestions. Otherwise, very good :-)
Oh, and you have two conditional sentences there. For me, the first with "would", and then "so I WOULD...". But with "will" is fine for speaking. Technically
"understand new places" - get to know; see; learn about
"understand" is not used for places, generally. And in this context you could perhaps use one of my suggestions. Otherwise, very good :-)
Oh, and you have two conditional sentences there. For me, the first with "would", and then "so I WOULD...". But with "will" is fine for speaking. Technically
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