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We owe our achievements to all our stakeholders – investors, employees, vendors and clients. Because without their support , we would not have achieved these many share of honor within last two years.

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Doctor D · Accepted Answer

"Because" makes your second sentence a fragment. It is not needed, so delete it. Also the phrase "these many share of honor" is not grammatical or clear. So:

We owe our achievements to all our stakeholders – investors, employees, vendors and clients. Without their support, we would not have won so many honors [Or: achieved so much] over the last two years.

Note that I have also replaced "within the last two years" with "over the last two years." This would be the more common usage.

I hope this helps.

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