Jajar Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
please cheak my letter.
Suppose that you are the office manager at Siam computer Company .Since your annual banquete for all emloyees in coming up in 2 weeks[on August 24 ,2007, from6.30-10.30p.m.],you are started thinking about a good place to hold it .You have decided to write Mr.Thomson Waley,catering manager,Orchid hotel,156-160 Alexandra Road,Bangkok,10000 to find out whethethe .he can serve your needs.You want to know about such things as the availability of parking[for the expected 50 cars]and the various menus,dining rooms and other banquet facilities along with the charge of these services.
Siam Computer Company
July 31,2007
Mr. Thomson Waley
catering manager Orchid Hotel
156-160 Alexandra Road,Bangkok,10000
I am writing to enquire whether we would to like to know about detail information your hotel for annuaul banquet on August24 ,2007, from6.30-10.30p.m.You are started thinking about a good place to hold it .We want to know about such things as the availability of parking[for the expected 50 cars]and the various menus,dining rooms and other banquet facilities along with the charge of these services.
Thank you for your help.I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincrely
xxxxxx
xxxxxx
Siam Computer Company
July 31,2007
Mr. Thomson Waley
catering manager Orchid Hotel
156-160 Alexandra Road,Bangkok,10000
I am writing to enquire whether we would to like to know about detail information your hotel for annuaul banquet on August24 ,2007, from6.30-10.30p.m.You are started thinking about a good place to hold it .We want to know about such things as the availability of parking[for the expected 50 cars]and the various menus,dining rooms and other banquet facilities along with the charge of these services.
Thank you for your help.I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincrely
xxxxxx
xxxxxx
Top answer
You haven't told him how many people are expected, what sort of meal you require or what alternative dates may be available. You haven't asked him about the size of the rooms, the number of people who can be accommodated in them, or asked for specific information about other facilities. Try again!
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You haven't told him how many people are expected, what sort of meal you require or what alternative dates may be available. You haven't asked him about the size of the rooms, the number of people who can be accommodated in them, or asked for specific information about other facilities.
Try again!
Try again!
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