Please can you tell me if this letter sounds ok?

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0I guys! I'm new here...I need a little help with this letter. Can you tell me if it sounds ok to you? I'm sure there is a lot of things that sounds weird in it lol...02br02br00thanks!02br02br00Good day, Mister, Madam,02br02br00I have recently studied electricity at La Cité Collégiale of Ottawa, which I have graduated from last week. I am currently looking for work either as a full time or part time employee.02br02br00You may not have any openings for an apprentice right now, but I will be glad to work for you as a helper or labour if you ever need somebody for that. If you have time to look at my resume, you will notice that I have good life and work experience in various domains. I am also a serious and reliable worker on which you can count.02br02br00I thank you in advance for taking the time to read this letter and I’m looking forward to hearing from you. 02br02br00Truly yours,02br02br00 Francis0-

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

0Dear Sir or Madam:02br
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00I have recently studied Electronics at La Cité Collégiale of Ottawa, which I graduated from last week. I am currently looking for work either as a full time or part time employee, as an apprentice or as a helper.02br
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00You will see from my resume that I have considerable life and work experience in various areas. I am also a serious and reliable worker.02br
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00I thank you in advance for taking the time to read this letter and I look forward to hearing from you if my application is of interest. 02br
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00Sincerely yours,02br
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00 Francis [Last name]0-

Please can you tell me if this letter sounds ok?

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