please can any one modify my covering letter pleaseeee

013th March, 200502br
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00Graduate Recruitment Manger02br
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00Dear Mr./Mrs./Ms.02br
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01b00Subject: Candidature for internship.02b02br
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00I am currently a student of MSc IT01b00 - 02b00Major in System Integration and Project Management at Institut Supérieur d’Electronique de Paris (I.S.E.P) one of the well-known, reputed engineering schools of France.02br
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00I am intensely interested to join an organisation like yours to pursue an Intenship as part of my MSc program. I came across to this opportunity through---------- I wrote this application letter to your company to be a candidate for that position, which suit with my educational backgrounds and my qualifications. 02br
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00Masters program at ISEP included subjects like Corporation organization and Project management which sharpened my project handling capabilities. Having an extensive background in software design and development along with 01b00commercial base 02b00my skill set can bring great deal of strategic alliance and business development in your company. 02br
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00This internship program at 01b01i00--------------02i02b00 00provides a solid base for professional and personal development. Therefore becoming an intern in your company and pursuing my cherished wish of working on enhancing projects in an international environment will further enhance my professional experience. The working environment, the vision, possible growth areas and reputation of ----------------- encourages me to apply in it.02br
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00 I am a highly numerate and IT literate student with a strong emphasis on team-working.02br
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00What my resume does not describe is my character. I am a conceptual thinker, a generator of creative ideas, and a self-starter I would greatly appreciate being included on your invitational list. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. 02br
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00Yours sincerely0-