Lcchang Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Personal Statement
Dear advisers,
My friend is currently applying to a graduate program of one university in the U.S., so he asked me to help him on his personal statement. Please see the following work done by me and revise it if you would like to.
One of the reasons that I want to apply to your program is to enhance my knowledge in the related field. In the past ten years, the booming economy in China has resulted in a relatively weak development of the countries surrounding it. Taiwan is not a exception either. Our growth in economy has never exceeded 5 percent yearly since then. Due to the reason, I found myself that I had to find some way to get me out of this bad situation, because I could be out of my job any minute if the company that I work for went under or if I didn't make myself become more competitive than others. Attaining a higher education degree and learning more about the global business and strategy is therefore the key to success.
Please advise.
Yours sincerely,
LCChang
My friend is currently applying to a graduate program of one university in the U.S., so he asked me to help him on his personal statement. Please see the following work done by me and revise it if you would like to.
One of the reasons that I want to apply to your program is to enhance my knowledge in the related field. In the past ten years, the booming economy in China has resulted in a relatively weak development of the countries surrounding it. Taiwan is not a exception either. Our growth in economy has never exceeded 5 percent yearly since then. Due to the reason, I found myself that I had to find some way to get me out of this bad situation, because I could be out of my job any minute if the company that I work for went under or if I didn't make myself become more competitive than others. Attaining a higher education degree and learning more about the global business and strategy is therefore the key to success.
Please advise.
Yours sincerely,
LCChang
Top answer
One of the reasons that I want to apply to your program is to enhance my knowledge in the related field. In the past ten years, the booming economy in China has resulted in a relatively weak development of the countries surrounding it. Taiwan is no exception to this.
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One of the reasons that I want to apply to your program is to enhance my knowledge in the related field. In the past ten years, the booming economy in China has resulted in a relatively weak development of the countries surrounding it. Taiwan is no exception to this. Our economic growth has never exceeded 5 percent yearly during this time and, due to this, I am in
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