Akka36 Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
Pay Rise Request/ Help me
Hello! Could anyone take a look at my short pay rise request, please?
Does it sound natural, appropriate?
"Dear Mr...,
I express my general satisfaction in the position I currently hold, however, I would like to kindly ask you to consider increase of my remuneration.
I have been your employee for many years. I have always performed my duties diligently and I am responsible and reliable person that you can always count on. Also, I would like to draw your attention to the fact that I am always available. I would be grateful if you could consider my request positively.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
..."
Does it sound natural, appropriate?
"Dear Mr...,
I express my general satisfaction in the position I currently hold, however, I would like to kindly ask you to consider increase of my remuneration.
I have been your employee for many years. I have always performed my duties diligently and I am responsible and reliable person that you can always count on. Also, I would like to draw your attention to the fact that I am always available. I would be grateful if you could consider my request positively.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
..."
Top answer
, I would like to ask you to consider a salary increase for me. I enjoy my work, and I have been your employee for many years now. I have always performed my duties diligently.
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Dear Mr...,
I would like to ask you to consider a salary increase for me. I enjoy my work, and I have been your employee for many years now. I have always performed my duties diligently. I am a responsible person that you can always rely on and have always made myself available.
I would be grateful if you could consider my request. I look forward to receiving
I would like to ask you to consider a salary increase for me. I enjoy my work, and I have been your employee for many years now. I have always performed my duties diligently. I am a responsible person that you can always rely on and have always made myself available.
I would be grateful if you could consider my request. I look forward to receiving
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