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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

past tense/past perfect tense

On the night when he had enrolled himself in X.

Is a tense correct in the above sentence? I thought a past tense was appropiate.

Thank you
  

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First, you know that whichever tense you use, it's not a complete sentence? Also, enrolled is not necessarily a reflexive verb - you can simply enroll in a class or a program, you don't have to enroll yourself. " It's clearly anwering the question "when" so you don't need to include it.

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First, you know that whichever tense you use, it's not a complete sentence?

Also, enrolled is not necessarily a reflexive verb - you can simply enroll in a class or a program, you don't have to enroll yourself.

And finally, you don't need the "when." It's clearly anwering the question "when" so you don't need to include it.

Now, moving on to tenses: Simple past seems h
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Hi Barbara

On the night he enrolled in the art class, he keep a step toward his goal of becoming an illustrator.

The word in bold is a typo. If I'm not wrong, it should be 'kept'.
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Tense-wise, yes in theory it should be kept.

However, neither keep nor kept make any sense in this context.

We take a step towards, not keep a step towards.

The sentence should be

On the night he enrolled in the art class, he took a step towards his goal of becoming an illustator.
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Nona

I agree that it should be 'took a step towards'.
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Heavens, yes, it should have been "took"! I had a fever last night - I wonder what other mysterious typos I made! Sorry for any confusion.
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Hello Barbara

I hope you are okay today. I wish you a speedy recovery.