Grammar books say that “had + PP” is used for something that happened before the past events. i.e. The event that happened before that which happened in the past. Like, “He had refused to narrate what hadtakenplacebeforehefled to her house,”
Then, how about, “He hadsaidhewanted comfort, not stuffiness”. In this sentence, according to the grammar books, “His saying” comes before “his wanting comfort”, which is logically impossible. How can he say he wanted comfort, before he wanted comfort?
How about this one? “She hadseenwhathappened to me during those Octobers when the Sox tantalized us once again”. How can she see what happened before it happens?
Below are some more examples from COCA.
Definitely I seem to be missing something….
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The client hadsaidhewanted an aggressive campaign.
Mr. Bush hadsaidhewanted a vote in the UN no matter what the whip count.
Mrs. Munson hadseenwhathappened, but she'd left without even changing her surly expression.
And that after he haddecidedhewanted to marry my mother, he once asked her: " Are you afraid? " And my mother answered: " No, I am not afraid. "
Marta's son Beau, then thirteen years old, haddecidedhewanted to live with his mother again.
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pructus, I think this topic ( past perfect) raises more problems for learners than other areas of the grammar in my opinion. while ,before, after, when, as, and during ). Just like this one: pructus “He had refused to narrate what had taken place before he fled to her house,” That said, you have a double past perfect construction, which is a mouthful and not necessary, that my opinion.
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pructus, I think this topic ( past perfect) raises more problems for learners than other areas of the grammar in my opinion. I think many experts will agree and have pointed out more than few times here that we should avoid past perfect if the contexts can be narrated clearly without this use; especially when contexts involve the use of conjunction (i.e.while ,before, after, when, as, and duri