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Seagull Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Past or past perfect

a. The man who I thought my best friend deceived me.
b. The man who I had thought my best friend deceived me.

Which sounds more natural to a native speaker? And, what is the most natural expression when we want to say things like this?
  

Top answer

They don't make any sense. Any reason for the relative clause?

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They don't make any sense. Any reason for the relative clause?
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seagullWhich sounds more natural to a native speaker?
Neither is natural.
seagullwhat is the most natural expression when we want to say things like this?
The man I (had) thought was my best friend deceived me.
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seagullWhich sounds more natural to a native speaker?
I think those can be made 'natural' in a formal written piece with further elision:

a. The man I thought my best friend deceived me.
b. The man I had thought my best friend deceived me.
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With the "who " clause, would this be a possibility?
The man, who I had thought was my friend, deceived me.
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grammarfreakThe man, who I had thought was my friend, deceived me.
That seems to me to be awfully clunky. Gus's is by far the most expected.
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I was just trying to fit the" who" in the OP into a possible sentence scenario. I agree, it is clunky! That said, sometimes these awkwardly written sentences certainly can be a potential mind field as I tried to walk through the answering process. I got in trouble in many times in the past..
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grammarfreak a potential mind field
Time for the 2nd emoticon of my career!
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Thank you very much, everyone.
I learned a lot from you.

Now I noticed I'd missed my earlier posting. I apologize for causing you trouble.

I meant to say,
a. The man who I thought was my best friend deceived me.
b. The man who I had thought was my best friend deceived me.

Are they still unnatural to a native speaker?
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seagullAre they still unnatural to a native speaker?
No.