Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
NOWADAYS RADIO is being replaced by tv and the internet
HELLO I WANT SOME BODY CORRECT MY ESSAY
Although radio is so convenient, TV and the internet are very popular and amusing. From my point of view, TV and the internet have some unique features that radio not.
both internet and TV have screen which absorb people. unlike these tow vital media radio is like small box which just broadcast sound and by using radio people can not able to see screen then it becom boring.
Although radio is so convenient, TV and the internet are very popular and amusing. From my point of view, TV and the internet have some unique features that radio not.
both internet and TV have screen which absorb people. unlike these tow vital media radio is like small box which just broadcast sound and by using radio people can not able to see screen then it becom boring.
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I have underlined some problems. Correct them and post your revised 'essay' here. Although radio is so convenient, TV and the internet are very popular and amusing .
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I have underlined some problems. Correct them and post your revised 'essay' here.
Although radio is so convenient, TV and the internet are very popular and amusing. From my point of view, TV and the internet have some unique features that radio not. both internet and TV have screen which absorb people. unlike these tow vital med
Although radio is so convenient, TV and the internet are very popular and amusing. From my point of view, TV and the internet have some unique features that radio not. both internet and TV have screen which absorb people. unlike these tow vital med
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