Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Not finished best day story ;/ Check and try write somethink more ;]
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00 I have a lot memory from childhood , but every year on 31 december i remind one of them . My first new years eve , allways before this day i go slept too early. 02 br
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00 In that special day, I was at home. The day began like every other in my six years long life. I woke up at 14 o'clock , beacouse i wanna be realy 01 u 00 ( have enought sleep time i dont know word) 02 u 00 . I wear something , ate breakfast , and went with my famili to grandmother . There i was waiting for fireworks show . Every secund was long like hour . After eleven p.m i was realy 01 u 00 ( not enough sleep ? ) 02 u 00 , but i realy wanna see fireworks. 02 br
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00 I dont know to 01 u 00 words 02 u 00 , and i can find them on translators . I must now write something about this fireworks show , and write why it is best day of my life. Please help me . 0-
00 I have a lot memory from childhood , but every year on 31 december i remind one of them . My first new years eve , allways before this day i go slept too early. 02 br
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00 In that special day, I was at home. The day began like every other in my six years long life. I woke up at 14 o'clock , beacouse i wanna be realy 01 u 00 ( have enought sleep time i dont know word) 02 u 00 . I wear something , ate breakfast , and went with my famili to grandmother . There i was waiting for fireworks show . Every secund was long like hour . After eleven p.m i was realy 01 u 00 ( not enough sleep ? ) 02 u 00 , but i realy wanna see fireworks. 02 br
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00 I dont know to 01 u 00 words 02 u 00 , and i can find them on translators . I must now write something about this fireworks show , and write why it is best day of my life. Please help me . 0-
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02 br 02 br 00 I was at home that special day. The day began like any other one during my six-year life. I woke up at 14 o'clock because I really wanted to have a good sleep.
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0 This is how I'd change it. 02 br
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00 I was at home that special day. The day began like any other one during my six-year life. I woke up at 14 o'clock because I really wanted to have a good sleep. I put something on, ate breakfast, and went to grandmother with my family. I was waiting for a firework show there. Every second lasted as long as an hour. I became rather sleepy
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00 I was at home that special day. The day began like any other one during my six-year life. I woke up at 14 o'clock because I really wanted to have a good sleep. I put something on, ate breakfast, and went to grandmother with my family. I was waiting for a firework show there. Every second lasted as long as an hour. I became rather sleepy
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