Kk Posted 22 years ago
Grammar
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I think these sentences still have a lot of room for improvement.
Can you help me check them. Tell me how to correct them.
I would appreciate your help.
Thank you very much.
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It is after breaking the record of most hits in a single season that Ichiro Suzuki has become an Asian hero.
I think it is his tip that helps me surmount many difficulties in my life
What Ichiro Suzuki did can achieve these goals in baseball games?
Adverbial clause
Although he has been a star player in Japan, he still needs to overcome a large number of challenges including different culture, different language, and advanced skill in baseball before standing on stage of MLB.
Some people used a metaphor, baseball, to describe a real life.
Only through realizing Ichiro Suzuki’s tip in baseball games, can I hit a home run of my life.
Can you help me check them. Tell me how to correct them.
I would appreciate your help.
Thank you very much.
Cleft sentence
It is after breaking the record of most hits in a single season that Ichiro Suzuki has become an Asian hero.
I think it is his tip that helps me surmount many difficulties in my life
What Ichiro Suzuki did can achieve these goals in baseball games?
Adverbial clause
Although he has been a star player in Japan, he still needs to overcome a large number of challenges including different culture, different language, and advanced skill in baseball before standing on stage of MLB.
Some people used a metaphor, baseball, to describe a real life.
Only through realizing Ichiro Suzuki’s tip in baseball games, can I hit a home run of my life.
Top answer
I hope I didn't change your meanings, KK: It is after breaking the record for most hits in a single season that Ichiro Suzuki became an Asian hero. I think it is his advice that has helped me surmount many difficulties in my life. What Ichiro Suzuki did is achieve these goals in baseball games.
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I hope I didn't change your meanings, KK:
It is after breaking the record for most hits in a single season that Ichiro Suzuki became an Asian hero.
I think it is his advice that has helped me surmount many difficulties in my life.
What Ichiro Suzuki did is achieve these goals in baseball games. (This is actually a 'pseudo-cleft' sentence.)
Although he
It is after breaking the record for most hits in a single season that Ichiro Suzuki became an Asian hero.
I think it is his advice that has helped me surmount many difficulties in my life.
What Ichiro Suzuki did is achieve these goals in baseball games. (This is actually a 'pseudo-cleft' sentence.)
Although he
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HELLO Mister Micawber Thank you for your help.
I really admire Ichiro's achievement.
I really admire Ichiro's achievement.
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