WANG CHUN Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
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Disadvantages of sports are less than advantages of sports for children in my book.
Parents place their young children in kindergarten.
There is a common phenomenon that modern young students like to eat saturated-fat food, especially fast food
Can you help me check these sentences.
Thank you for your help.
Disadvantages of sports are less than advantages of sports for children in my book.
Parents place their young children in kindergarten.
There is a common phenomenon that modern young students like to eat saturated-fat food, especially fast food
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hello **** Chun, Your sentences are not "bad" in themselves, but they do need a bit of polishing. 1 - "Disadvantages of sports are less than advantages of sports for children in my book. " You could reput it this way: In my book, there are many more advantages than disadvantages resulting from the practice of sports for children .
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hello **** Chun,
Your sentences are not "bad" in themselves, but they do need a bit of polishing.
1 - "Disadvantages of sports are less than advantages of sports for children in my book. "
You could reput it this way:
In my book, there are many more advantages than disadvantages resulting from the practice of sports for children .
to my eyes, "
Your sentences are not "bad" in themselves, but they do need a bit of polishing.
1 - "Disadvantages of sports are less than advantages of sports for children in my book. "
You could reput it this way:
In my book, there are many more advantages than disadvantages resulting from the practice of sports for children .
to my eyes, "
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