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Mizanur Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Need the correction of following line

But I think ‘ABCNGO is highly satisfied with NGO Affairs Bureau not for Bureau’s supportive manner rather/but for Bureau’s non-controlling manner’.
  

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But I think that ABCNGO is highly satisfied with the NGO Affairs Bureau, not for the Bureau’s support, but for its laissez-faire approach.

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But I think that ABCNGO is highly satisfied with the NGO Affairs Bureau, not for the Bureau’s support, but for its laissez-faire approach.
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'laissez-faire approach" may not appropriate to serve my purpose. I wanted to depict that ABC NGO is satisfied with bureau. reason is that bureau does not take any account of ABCNGO where bureau is supposed to control strictly NGOs activities.