Need some help with grammar and punctuation in a poem.
Hello Everyone,
First time posting, I hope someone can help me out here.
I wrote a poem for my girlfriend that I would like to give it to her for Valentines day. It's my first time writing a poem and I would like the grammar and punctuation to be perfect since I will be printing it out and putting it on a frame for her.
Thanks in advance,
Alex
Poem:
Every day throughout the day, I think about you, and just say yay.
Waking up, to your pretty smile, It makes everything worth my while.
Your lips, your eyes, make me insane, You drive me crazy I can’t explain.
Because my love, words can't define, and your damn booty is so damn fine.
My midget monkey I hope you know, that our love will forever grow.
I’m so in love with you that I am blind, sometimes I think I’m losing my mind.
I promise you, if you are ever down. From your face I will take your frown.
Your the one I will always need, because without you my heart would always bleed.
You and me, don’t belong apart, I love you baby with all my heart.
Top answer
Poem: Every day throughout the day The thought of you makes me say: Yay! Waking up to your lovely smile makes everything all worth my while. Your lips, your eyes, make me insane.
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