Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
need some help
Hi there
I am working on writing an English homepage for my company,( i got to say this is way out of my league)
I want to ask `In 2000, with the expansion of the company, ### trading moved into a new office building and extended its business line to the import of Chinese chemical materials.` is there any grammatical errors in the phrases? Or you think there is other native-speaker-like expression? Anyone is welcome to drop any suggestions, I would really appreciate.
Josephine
I am working on writing an English homepage for my company,( i got to say this is way out of my league)
I want to ask `In 2000, with the expansion of the company, ### trading moved into a new office building and extended its business line to the import of Chinese chemical materials.` is there any grammatical errors in the phrases? Or you think there is other native-speaker-like expression? Anyone is welcome to drop any suggestions, I would really appreciate.
Josephine
Top answer
In 2000, with the expansion of the company, ### Trading moved into a new office building and broadened its business to include the importation of Chinese chemicals.
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In 2000, with the expansion of the company, ### Trading moved into a new office building and broadened its business to include the importation of Chinese chemicals.
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