Here is my TOEFL response. Can anyone here show my my mistake or make some suggestions for a better expression in my response ?Thanks in advance.
Do you prefer to write a paper or give an oral presentation ? There are 2 reasons why for me it's always better to write a paper than to give an oral presentation. First of all,I am not quite an eloquent or lively speaker . When talking before class about a particular subject , I can't help myself getting nervous so I'm often faced with the prospect of forgetting all my point. I remember I once got an F on my biology oral exam even when i had prepared for it quite carefully. The second reason why I'd prefer a paper test is may be I'm not good at speaking but I'm a gifted writer . Unlike speaking , I know how to express my idea or give an answer in my writing clearly and coherently. Some of my paragraphs were printed (published / put ???) in the school newspaper. So only by taking a paper test can I extend my writing skill and receive a deserving grade.
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There are 2 reasons why for me it's always better to write a paper than to give an oral presentation. First of all, I am not quite an eloquent or lively speaker. When talking before in front of a class about a particular subject, I can't help myself for getting nervous so I'm often faced with the prospect possibility of forgetting all my point.
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There are 2 reasons why for me it's always better to write a paper than to give an oral presentation. First of all, I am not quite an eloquent or lively speaker. When talking before in front of a class about a particular subject, I can't help myself for getting nervous so I'm often faced with the prospect possibility of forgetting all my point. I remember once I got an ''F'' on my biology oral