Need help pls for Motivatio letter

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It would be nice of you to have a look and make subjestions. thx in advance
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Re: 26091 – Graduat test engineer

Dear Madam, Sir,

I have read the internal list of vacant positions within XXXXX send to me by Mr XXXXX.
After carefully reading it, I believe I can contribute to the evolution of the company, within the above position and that it will be a positive step towards building my career.

I have worked in the IT field since eight years. My duties include tendering, site co-ordination, management, implementation and maintenance of hardware, software’s.
In the last year, I gained some Scripting experiences witch I believe could be useful at the position of Test Engineer.

I’ am polyvalent, enthusiast, capable to adapt to any situations and eager to learn,
always seeking to improve. I have a good team spirit as well a taste for initiatives.
Please find enclosed my resume, witch outline my experiences and other relevant information.
I am very much looking to meet you or(Looking forward to hear from you.)

Yours faithfully

lou

Nona the brit · Accepted Answer

Re: 26091 – Graduate test engineer

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have read the internal list of vacant positions within *** send to me by Mr ***.

After carefully reading it, I believe I could contribute to the success of the company within the above position and that it would be a positive step towards building my career.

I have worked in the IT field for eight years. My duties include tendering, site co-ordination, management, and the implementation and maintenance of hardware and software. Last year, I gained some Scripting experience which I believe could be useful for the position of Test Engineer.

I’ am polyvalent (this word only has meaning within specificchemical/biological contexts, it is not a word you can apply to people. What were you trying to express?), enthusiastic, capable of adapting to new situations, eager to learn and always seeking to improve. I have a good team spirit as well as (a taste for initiatives) part in brackets does not make sense. A taste for what? or able to work on my own initiative?
Please find enclosed my resume, which outlines my experience and other relevant information.
I am very much looking to meet you or(Looking forward to hear from you.)

Yours faithfully

lou

Lou. · Answer

hi nona,
polyvalent : i met multitask (personne that is able to do different things, at the same time)
and thx a lot for the help

Email Removed">Re: 26091 – Graduate test engineer

Dear Sir,

I have read the internal list of vacant positions within XXXX send to me by Mr ***. After carefully reading it, I believe I could contribute to the success of the company, within the above position and that it would be a positive step towards building my career.

I have worked in the IT field for eight years. My duties include tendering, site co-ordination, management, and the implementation and maintenance of hardware and software.

Last year, I gained some Scripting experience which I believe could be useful at the position for Test Engineer.

I’ am enthusiastic, capable of adapting to new situations and eager to learn,
and always seeking to improve. I have a good team spirit as well as a sense for initiatives.
Please find enclosed my resume, which outlines my experience and other relevant information.

Looking forward to hear from you.

Yours faithfully

Nona the brit · Answer

Dear Sir,

I have read the internal list of vacant positions within *** send to me by Mr ***. After carefully reading it, I believe I could contribute to the success of the company, (delete comma) within the above position and that it would be a positive step towards building my career.

I have worked in the IT field for eight years. My duties include tendering, site co-ordination, management, and the implementation and maintenance of hardware and software.

Last year, I gained some Scripting experience which I believe could be useful in the position of Test Engineer.

I’(delete apostrophe) am enthusiastic, capable of adapting to new situations and eager to learn,
and always seeking to improve. I have a good team spirit as well as a sense for initiatives (still makes no sense, sorry. What do you mean by initiatives?).
Please find enclosed my resume, which outlines my experience and other relevant information.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Lou. · Answer

I have read the internal list of vacant positions within S.W.I.F.T. send to me by Mr Barzin Benoit. After carefully reading it, I believe I could contribute to the success of the company within the above position and that it would be a positive step towards building my career.

I have worked in the IT field for eight years. My duties include tendering, site
co-ordination, management, and the implementation and maintenance of hardware
and software.

Last year, I gained some Scripting experience which I believe could be useful in the position of Test Engineer.

I am enthusiastic, capable of adapting to new situations and eager to learn, and always seeking to improve. I have a good team spirit as well as a sense for initiatives. (ability to initate things; entreprise (lack if initiatives), first step)

Please find enclosed my resume, which outlines my experience and other relevant information.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Lou. · Answer

thx nona

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