Salam 1101 Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
need help
Hi, could you please take a look at following and give me your suggestions.
Thanks in advance.
We buy your used items. Mainly Kansai area.
Are you moving or remodeling your office? Do you need to get rid of furniture?
We buy office funiture or designer furniture.
Even if you can't find the thing you want to sell in the item list, feel free to send us e-mail or call to inquire, or use a request form.
Free estimate:
Send us a picture of the item with the details about it.
We will get back to you with the rough price.
In the nature of used things, we need to see an actual item to give you the exact price.
Thanks in advance.
We buy your used items. Mainly Kansai area.
Are you moving or remodeling your office? Do you need to get rid of furniture?
We buy office funiture or designer furniture.
Even if you can't find the thing you want to sell in the item list, feel free to send us e-mail or call to inquire, or use a request form.
Free estimate:
Send us a picture of the item with the details about it.
We will get back to you with the rough price.
In the nature of used things, we need to see an actual item to give you the exact price.
Top answer
You forgot the indefinite article 'an' in 'send us email'. 'Mainly Kansai area' isn't a sentence so maybe you could put that in brackets or use an em dash or en dash.
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You forgot the indefinite article 'an' in 'send us email'.
'Mainly Kansai area' isn't a sentence so maybe you could put that in brackets or use an em dash or en dash.
'Mainly Kansai area' isn't a sentence so maybe you could put that in brackets or use an em dash or en dash.
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