P3t3r1 Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Need grammar help on a very very short paragraph
0 Hi, I would really appreciate it if someone could read it over and see if there are any grammar errors. I checked it over but it is always helpful to have a second check. Thanks. 02 br
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00 William E. Gladstone, the great statesman of 00 , once remarked in a speech that “selfishness is the greatest curse of the human race.” This selfishness, a terrible and destructive force of the human nature, is a central theme in both the 01 u 00 Shining Houses 02 u 00 by Alice Munro and 01 u 00 The Winner 02 u 00 by Barbara Kimenye. 01 u 00 The Shining Houses 02 u 00 is story about a neighborhood in a fictionalized western city that is trying to eradicate an elderly occupant simply because her property doesn’t meet their standards. 01 u 00 The Winner 02 u 00 , on the other hand, talks about an elderly man in 01 02 00 winning the football lottery and the consequences that comes with it. 00 00 Although 01 u 00 The Shining Houses 02 u 00 and 01 u 00 The Winner 02 u 00 uses two very different settings, both emphasize the universal quality of the selfishness that exist in humans. Selfishness is universal because it exists in all types of people, can be destructive in many different ways, and encounters many different kinds of resistance. 0-
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00 William E. Gladstone, the great statesman of 00 , once remarked in a speech that “selfishness is the greatest curse of the human race.” This selfishness, a terrible and destructive force of the human nature, is a central theme in both the 01 u 00 Shining Houses 02 u 00 by Alice Munro and 01 u 00 The Winner 02 u 00 by Barbara Kimenye. 01 u 00 The Shining Houses 02 u 00 is story about a neighborhood in a fictionalized western city that is trying to eradicate an elderly occupant simply because her property doesn’t meet their standards. 01 u 00 The Winner 02 u 00 , on the other hand, talks about an elderly man in 01 02 00 winning the football lottery and the consequences that comes with it. 00 00 Although 01 u 00 The Shining Houses 02 u 00 and 01 u 00 The Winner 02 u 00 uses two very different settings, both emphasize the universal quality of the selfishness that exist in humans. Selfishness is universal because it exists in all types of people, can be destructive in many different ways, and encounters many different kinds of resistance. 0-
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0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 P3t3r1 12 cite 10 Hi, I would really appreciate it if someone could read it over and see if there are any grammar errors. I checked it over but it is always helpful to have a second check. 12 br 12 br 10 William E.
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